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Episode 4: Part 26

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Episode 4: Queen Natashia
Original Characters and Concept: Travers, Kenyon, & Rioux Jordan; Alex & Natasha Gorely; Sam Barnett
Original Story (Queen Natashia): Alex Gorely, Kenyon & Travers Jordan
Adapted to Comic Form by: Travers, Rioux, & Kenyon Jordan
Photos: Travers & Rioux Jordan
Background Photos: Search Engine Image Sources & personal photos
Art/SFX/Photo Editing: Travers Jordan
Editing: Kenyon Jordan, Therese Jordan
Social Media Coordinator: Danielle Jordan

5/1/23:
Not a lot to comment on this one! Though I am rather pleased with that giant staircase. A great use for our red and yellow bricks!

Comments from the Tagboard:

04/24/23 12:42 PM
BrickVoid: Dale should have a moment of brilliance, and have himself beamed aboard the Intrepid, to avoid being taken hostage! :D Of course there's bound to be interference from the ring system, Dale could see that he can escape, if he's thinking things rthrough properly! :D

Transcript
Panel 1:
Narrative Text: Meanwhile...
Lieutenant Commander Natashia Starrat: Our Commander is in danger out there. You have to let us beam him back!
Supreme Advisor: That's quite impossible at the moment, unless you don't mind him being in pieces.

Panel 2:
Supreme Advisor: The incoming particle shower disrupts all but pad-to-pad transmissions.
    We'll just have to wait.
Supreme Advisor (aside): Watch it with that bandage.
Pavembril (aside): Yessir. Sorry, sir.

Panel 3:
Natashia: So you're just going to leave him out there alone? The only reason he went out there was to find out who tried to kill you!
Supreme Advisor: Was that really it?
    I assumed it was to butter me up after insulting me during his failed negotiating efforts.

Panel 4:
Grayson Talbot: I'm certain the Commander is fine. He knows what he's doing!
    And oh look! It's your Captain of the Guard! Perhaps he has good news.
Supreme Advisor (aside): Are you finally done?
Pavembril (aside): Yessir.
Supreme Advisor (aside): Then return to your duties!
Pavembril (aside): Right away, sir!

Panel 5:
Supreme Advisor: Wel?!?
Guard Captain: My apologies, sir. There was a firefight with some rebels--
Supreme Advisor: Ahem.
Guard Captain: I mean terrorists. We have prisoners... but the assassin escaped.
Supreme Advisor: Spare no manpower. There is nothing of greater import than finding that criminal!

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