Episode 5: Planet of the Laugh Track!
Original Characters and Concept: Travers, Kenyon, & Rioux Jordan; Alex & Natasha Gorely; Sam Barnett
Original Story (Trapped on the Planet of the Laugh Track!): Kenyon Jordan
Adapted to Comic Form by: Travers, Rioux, & Kenyon Jordan
Photos: Travers & Rioux Jordan
Background Photos: Search Engine Image Sources & personal photos
Art/SFX/Photo Editing: Travers Jordan
Editing: Kenyon Jordan, Therese Jordan
Social Media Coordinator: Danielle Jordan
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2/9/26:
Jeena's been a semi-recurring background character, mostly. (Though I think she's had a few lines). Which was good, because I
couldn't find Hawkins mini-figure. Er, I mean... he was injured in a plasma explosion. He's totally in sickbay and not lost
somewhere in the vicinity of the Lego table.
Speaking of minor blunders, I was going back to fix that mistake BrickVoid noticed in last week's next button and discovered that I'd also accidentally blanked the comment text for every installment going back to November. Oops.
Anyway... that's all fixed now, too!
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Transcript
Panel 1:
Andre Peters: Gah!
Zack Del Rio: Argh!
Panel 2:
Commander Dale Zurkett: Hawkins, engineering, report! We're shaking like a wash tub up here!
Unknown Transmission: Ha-ha-ha-ha-ha!
Dale: We need more power on that tractor!
Panel 3:
Ensign Jeena Jones: Hawkins and half the team were hit with a plasma overload, sir! We sent them to sickbay.
I'm in command down here at the moment. Ensign Jeena Jones.
The Potemkin is just too big and she's fighting us. We're overloading the engines!
Panel 4:
Andre: That's no overload! The safety regulator must have kicked in when we lost main computers!
Jones! You have to bypass the plasma regulator valve! Use the manual shunt on access panel 12.
Jones (comms): If you say so, sir...
. . .
Oh, wow, yes! Power output is doubling!
Zack Del Rio: So you can bypass plasma regulators with a little lever in 30 seconds. But shutting off our computers takes ALL
this?
Andre: No need to get snippy.
Zack: After this is over, I'M redesigning our computer setup, okay?
Panel 5:
Ensign Plozz: We've got her, sir. Right on the edge of the troposphere.
Dale: Nice job, everybody. Secure from general quarters. Reduce to yellow alert. Let's--
Panel 6:
Lieutenant Commander Natashia Staratt: Commander! Potemkin... she's launching torpedoes!
Dale: What??
Natashia: Five of them! Impact in 30 seconds!
Panel 7:
Dale: Get our shields up! Evasive!
Plozz: No response, sir! All power was routed to the tractor beam!
It will take one minute to charge the shield capacitors!
Helmsman Talia: Emergency warp is still unavailable!
Dale: Kill the tractor and forget shields! Point-defense phasers!
And brace!!
Panel 7:
SFX: Kra-choom!!
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