Episode 4: Queen Natashia
Original Characters and Concept: Travers, Kenyon, & Rioux Jordan; Alex & Natasha Gorely; Sam Barnett
Original Story (Queen Natashia): Alex Gorely, Kenyon & Travers Jordan
Adapted to Comic Form by: Travers, Rioux, & Kenyon Jordan
Photos: Travers & Rioux Jordan
Background Photos: Search Engine Image Sources & personal photos
Art/SFX/Photo Editing: Travers Jordan
Editing: Kenyon Jordan, Therese Jordan
Social Media Coordinator: Danielle Jordan
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9/9/24:
I'm drawing a blank! Enjoy the comic :)
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Transcript
Panel 1:
Supreme Advisor: Answer me, Commander! You will not ignore me again! Commander!
Commander Vedrix: Sir, I will not obey that order. I serve the Empire. Not your petty whims.
Panel 2:
Supreme Advisor: Very well. Let it be known to all fleet captains and centurions: Commander Vedrix is relieved from command.
Subordinate officers, subdue and relieve Vedrix immediately!
Door Control: Welcome, Mr. Supreme Advisor. Voice print confirmed. Please enter your passcode.
Panel 3:
Vedrix: If any of you wish to relieve me, I invite you to attempt it now.
Helmsman Grastock: I've served with you for ten years, Commander. I know who I stand with.
Comms Officer Garl: Hear hear!
Science Officer Yana: Indeed!
Grastock: So what are your orders?
Vedrix: Maintain defensive fire on the Federation ship. Do not attack the planet.
Supreme Advisor: Do you hear me? All orders from Commander Vedrix are now illegal. You will arrest him and follow my command: Destroy the Spoogian Particle Shield system.
Panel 4:
Captain Yaats: Mr. Advisor, this is Captain Yaats of the Deathbeak. We shall obey. For the Empire!
Supreme Advisor: For the Empire. Your reward shall be great, Commander Yaats.
Door Control: Passcode confirmed. Please proceed to the secure bunker.
Panel 5:
Vedrix: Yaats! I order you not to follow that command!
Imperial interest in this planet does not extend to destroying it!
Yaha! Inititiate command code override on the Deathbeak!
Yana: I'm trying, sir! They've locked me out!
Panel 6:
Narrative Text: The Deathbeak...
Yaats: Vedrix, you're a traitorous fool. You and your entire crew shall answer for your crimes.
Deathbeak Helmsan: Particle Defense targeted. Firing solution calculated.
Panel 7:
Yaats: Fire.
SFX: Particled!
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