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Episode 4: Part 49

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Episode 4: Queen Natashia
Original Characters and Concept: Travers, Kenyon, & Rioux Jordan; Alex & Natasha Gorely; Sam Barnett
Original Story (Queen Natashia): Alex Gorely, Kenyon & Travers Jordan
Adapted to Comic Form by: Travers, Rioux, & Kenyon Jordan
Photos: Travers & Rioux Jordan
Background Photos: Search Engine Image Sources & personal photos
Art/SFX/Photo Editing: Travers Jordan
Editing: Kenyon Jordan, Therese Jordan
Social Media Coordinator: Danielle Jordan

Not a lot to add here... I really like this Lego set!

Comments from the Tagboard:

11/08/23 11:16 AM
Freezer: Kinda feel bad for the Prince. He seems like a sweet, if not too bright, guy who thinks he's doing the right thing.
11/06/23 12:47 PM
BrickVoid: I like where this storyline is going so far. Great comic so far, I sincerely hope it comes out th way you want it. :)

Panel 1:
Narrative Text: Meanwhile... Romulan Security Station:
Romulan Guard Captain: All right, I'm here.... now what was so sensitive you couldn't explain it over the comms?
Romulan Guard: Sir, we've lost signal in the queen's quarters.
Guard Captain: What?! And you're just sitting here? Arm up and--

Panel 2:
Guard: No no... I didn't want to cause a panic. The servant put a towel over our camera.
    And we're getting garbled audio. I think the water is running.
Guard Captain: You should have led with that. So the perimeter is secure?
Guard: Yessir... no movement in the hallway or outside the building.
    And no unusual energy spikes.

Panel 3:
Guard Captain: Still... we should be cautious about an escape attempt.
    Accompany the prince and ensure the queen is still in her quarters.
    But be discreet! And allow a few more minutes. We don't want her to know she's being observed.
Guard: Yessir.
    What about the servant? She placed that towel perfectly.
    Should I have alerted the supreme advisor?
Guard Captain: No, he has enough to deal with. It's likely a coincidence. She's just a Spoogian, after all.
    But do keep a close eye on her. Just in case.

Panel 4:
Narrative Text: And shortly...
Prince: My queen? It is I, your betrothed! Have I arrived too soon?
    . . .
    My queen? Are you all right?

Panel 5:
Guard: Stand aside, my Lord. I'll check on the situation.
Prince: Absolutely not! I won't have you barging in on my dearest brandishing a disruptor!
Guard: But--
SFX: ka-click
Pavembril: Apologies! The door was stuck. Come inside!
Prince: You see? Now stand down and go back to... whatever it is you do.

Panel 6:
Pavembril: My Prince! Her ladyship is nearly ready. May I offer you a refreshment?
Prince: Oh, yes, please! Do you have any soy sauce ale?
Pavembril: Yes... I think we have the bottle you left for the queen still.

Panel 7:
Prince: I do hope you like the accomodations, sweetums!
Natashia Starrat: Oh yes, they're very nice. Thank you.
Prince: And I wanted to tell you... the advisor and I came up with some wonderful ideas for our photo op later!

Panel 8:
Natashia: Oh did you? I wanted to talk to you about that...
    I had this fantastic idea while I was taking a bath.
Prince: Oh, you did? What was it?

Panel 9:
Natashia: Well, I thought... what if we went to the particle defense control?
Prince: Particle defense control?
Natashia: Think about it... it's the central nervous system that defends Spoogie from certain devastation!
    We could be filmed operating it... even defending against a particle shower!
Prince: Oh, I love it! We'd be like heroes!
    I'd love to be a hero. Like in the stories! But the advisor says I'm living in a fantasy. I need to be more serious.
Natashia: Well, you know... why don't you tell the Supreme Advisor it was your idea?
    And maybe he'll start taking your other ideas more seriously.
Prince: Really?? You'd do that?
Natashia: Absolutely.

Panel 10:
Prince: Wow!!! I'll go and tell him right away!
    You're the best!

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