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Episode 4: Part 84


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Episode 4: Queen Natashia
Original Characters and Concept: Travers, Kenyon, & Rioux Jordan; Alex & Natasha Gorely; Sam Barnett
Original Story (Queen Natashia): Alex Gorely, Kenyon & Travers Jordan
Adapted to Comic Form by: Travers, Rioux, & Kenyon Jordan
Photos: Travers & Rioux Jordan
Background Photos: Search Engine Image Sources & personal photos
Art/SFX/Photo Editing: Travers Jordan
Editing: Kenyon Jordan, Therese Jordan
Social Media Coordinator: Danielle Jordan

9/16/24:
Andre is kind of speaking to my personal experience in computer repair a little bit here.

Comments from the Tagboard:


09/22/24 11:17 PM
BrickVoid: it is kind of hard to see. But yeah it is there. I realized later something was happening in the panels. She'll be glad to be rid of it! :D
09/22/24 02:35 AM
Swiftbow: If you look closely, that's occuring between the first and last panels. (The noose is already off in panel 1)
09/18/24 06:30 PM
BrickVoid: Pavembrill must be wondering when someone is going to get that noose off her neck and those cuffs off her arms.
09/16/24 12:18 PM
BrickVoid: Looking good so far! :D I'm hoping the ending will be a fairly good one!

Transcript
Panel 1:
SFX: KRABOOOM!!!!!
Crowd: What was that?
    Huh?
    What just happened?

Panel 2:
SFX: KRABOOOM!!!!!
Commander Dale Zurkett: What the hell was that?
Natashia Starrat: Surface bombardment?
Dale: Maybe, but it's not loud enough to be from the square!
Andre Peters: What else would they fire at?

Panel 3:
Dale: Hank, talk to me! What's going on up there??

Panel 4:
Colonel Hank Thompson: It's bad, Dale! One of the warbirds broke off from combat. They fired a precision shot.
Dale (comms): At what, Hank?!
Hank: Particle defense control, Commander. We're trying to get a full scan, but... it looks like it's been wiped off the map.
    The particle storm tracker estimates 15 minutes to planetfall.
    We've got to get you out of there!
Dale (comms): That might be harder than it sounds. Stand by.

Panel 5:
Dale: What do we do? The city can't withstand this particle shower!
Commodore Jeffrey Bannister: We can mass beam onto the ship, can't we?
Dale; We can't lower shields to beam, and there's thousands of people! It's impossible!
Jeff: Well, we have to do something!
Natashia: To have any chance at all, we have to get ahead of this. There's going to be chaos when the people find out what happened?
    Dammit, the Supreme Advisor forced me onto TV before. But how can we get on the air NOW?
Andre: Well, I can do that.

Panel 6:
Natashia: You can? Are you sure?
Jeff: What about access passwords? Firewalls?
Andre: Well, if I was trying to do it from the ship, sure... that'd be a challenge. But we're on the planet. I figure the AV equipment is in this palace?
Natashia: Yeah, we broadcasted from just down the hallway.
Andre: Oh, great. Give me five minutes, then.

Panel 7:
Narrative Text: And about five minutes later...
Natashia: Spoogians, Romulans... my people! This is your queen.
    Please, I beeg you... cease your fighting and listen to me.
    All your lives depend on it.
Crowd: The queen speaks!
    Hold your fire!
    What of the Supreme Advisor?
    Do you see him here? Where IS he? Let us hear the queen!


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