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Episode 4: Part 20

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Episode 4: Queen Natashia
Original Characters and Concept: Travers, Kenyon, & Rioux Jordan; Alex & Natasha Gorely; Sam Barnett
Original Story (Queen Natashia): Alex Gorely, Kenyon & Travers Jordan
Adapted to Comic Form by: Travers, Rioux, & Kenyon Jordan
Photos: Travers & Rioux Jordan
Background Photos: Search Engine Image Sources & personal photos
Art/SFX/Photo Editing: Travers Jordan
Editing: Kenyon Jordan, Therese Jordan
Social Media Coordinator: Danielle Jordan

3/13/23:
Sorry about missing last week! We're back on track.

Comments from the Tagboard:

03/14/23 01:39 AM
BrickVoid: Dale must be wondering why he's the one doing the talking! Shouldn't the negotiator be doing the talking? Did you guys mess up the script or something? This is most definitely not how negotiators are supposed to start negotiations!
03/13/23 12:02 PM
Swiftbow: We're back! Sorry about that!

Transcript
Panel 1:
Narrative Text: And shortly, on the planet surface...
SFX: *VMMMMMMMMMMMMMM*

Panel 2:
Supreme Advisor: Ah, so you have arrived. Follow me. We have prepared a space.

Panel 3:
Commander Dale Zurkett: So, I'm just advising here, right? You're leading the talks.
Grayson Talbot: Well, of course. But there's plenty of ground you can cover better than me. I think you should start off.

Panel 4:
Dale: What? But I didn't prepare for that. I thought the Commodore was coming and--
Talbot: You'll do fine! Just follow your instincts.

Panel 5:
Narrative Text: And so...
Dale: So... uh...
Romulan Guard: *snarl*
Dale: right...

Panel 6:
Dale: I don't suppose you want to just leave the planet now?

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