Episode 4: Queen Natashia
Original Characters and Concept: Travers, Kenyon, & Rioux Jordan; Alex & Natasha Gorely; Sam Barnett
Original Story (Queen Natashia): Alex Gorely, Kenyon & Travers Jordan
Adapted to Comic Form by: Travers, Rioux, & Kenyon Jordan
Photos: Travers & Rioux Jordan
Background Photos: Search Engine Image Sources & personal photos
Art/SFX/Photo Editing: Travers Jordan
Editing: Kenyon Jordan, Therese Jordan
Social Media Coordinator: Danielle Jordan
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10/14/24:
That last panel got a little insane with how much is happening at the same time. Hopefully, you can still focus on the most important aspect: what's happening to
the nacelle.
Comments from the Tagboard:
10/14/24 03:52 PM
BrickVoid: Looking good so far! I wonder how they'll deal with the crack in the nacelle? Guess we'll find out next week! :D
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Transcript
Panel 1:
Major Taylor: Sir! Shields are buckling in multiple sectors. We're taking impacts on the primary hull!
Colonel Hank Reynolds: Shunt all available power to the shields! Evacuate all non-essential areas!
Taylor: There's nothing left to shunt!
Hank: Find something! Fire up the shields in the shuttle bay and turn on their shields, too!
Panel 2:
Hank: Helm! Adjust our yaw vector by 30 degrees! Angle the main hull away from the storm!
Helmsman Talia: Sir, that puts our secondary hull in the direct line of fire!
Hank: Exactly. Mr. LeRoux! Let's take some pressure off our shields. Get all railguns and phaser point defense online! Target the physical debris!
Lieutenant Zack LeRoux: Sir, all railgun crews report ready! Automated phaser point defense online!
Hank: All crews fire at will!
Panel 3:
Ensign Vern: It's not enough, bridge! The radiation is overloading all circuits! We need more power!
Crewman Glana: Oh hell! Overload! We have a warp plasma breach!
Vern: Dammit! We have to eject the core and get out of the storm!
SFX: PSHHH!!!
Panel 4:
Tech Chief Hawkins: No! We can lock that down. Redirect the flow to tubes 4 and 6!
Vern: Chief, that'll cripple the shielding in the starboard nacell!
Hawkins: It's that or lose the ship! We can do this!
We can--
Panel 5:
Hawkins (off screen): -- do this.
SFX: Crack!
Krapow!
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