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Episode 5: Part 17


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Episode 5: Planet of the Laugh Track!
Original Characters and Concept: Travers, Kenyon, & Rioux Jordan; Alex & Natasha Gorely; Sam Barnett
Original Story (Trapped on the Planet of the Laugh Track!): Kenyon Jordan
Adapted to Comic Form by: Travers, Rioux, & Kenyon Jordan
Photos: Travers & Rioux Jordan
Background Photos: Search Engine Image Sources & personal photos
Art/SFX/Photo Editing: Travers Jordan
Editing: Kenyon Jordan, Therese Jordan
Social Media Coordinator: Danielle Jordan

8/4/25:
I can't think of anything to add at the moment!


Comments from the Tagboard:

08/06/25 02:44 PM
Freezer: Okay, Jenkins. Time to show some backbone.

Transcript
Panel 1:
Special Envoy Lorraine Hulyard: Comms officer! Open a channel to that shuttle immediately!
Ensign Hylia: Commodore?
Commodore Jeffrey Bannister: It's okay, Hylia. Go ahead.

Panel 2:
Hylia: Hailing frequencies open. They're responding... putting it onscreen.

Panel 3:
Commander Vedrix: Ah, Intrepid. I'm very sorry our adventures together must end this way.
Jeff: Commander Vedrix: What are you doing in our shuttle? Where's Colonel Reynolds?
Vedrix: Your envoy's arrival gave me little choice, Commodore. I'm under direct orders to return the Supreme Advisor to Romulus.

Panel 4:
Vedrix: As such, I've taken the liberty of bringing him, and some insurance along with me.
    I have the Colonel, Ezzok, Grayson Talbot, and the Supreme Advisor imprisoned in the shuttle's cargo bay.
    Now... I do not wish for our diplomatic outreach to fail.
Colonel Hank Reynolds (aside): Nicely put.
Vedrix: Therefore... once I have returned the Advisor to my superiors on Romulus, I will remand control of this shuttle to the Colonel and Mr. Ezzok.
    And release Grayson Talbot to their custody.
    Do we have an understanding?

Panel 5:
Hulyard: Helmsman... target and destroy that shuttle immediately.
Helmsman Talia: Excuse me?
Jeff (aside): Excuse me?
Hulyard: You heard me. Launch a full firing solution or I will do it for you.
Talia: Ma'am, we are grounded. Even if I wanted to obey you, our tactical controls are currently disabled through engineering. We CAN'T fire anything.

Panel 6:
Hulyard: I am sick of hearing excuses instead of solutions!
Jeff: Special Envoy, if you keep giving illegal orders on my bridge, I will have you held in the brig.
Hulyard: Try that and see what happens in the end, Commodore. It will not be pretty for you.
    Captain Jenkins! This is your chance to finally impress me.
    That shuttle has been captured by enemy agents. Destroy it immediately!


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